Sixth Week of 505

The first two days of the class week were spent doing individual evaluations of our grades and projects in pairs of two people. I went on Tuesday and got a lot of insightful feedback to make my project better. such as reworking my abstract to summarize the whole project and to hit the key statistics that drive the "why" factor on the project.
Thursday our draft of chapter four is due as well as the completion of chapter three. Those slides are shown below:
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After the fact, I was e-mailed some crits to improve on the chapters for our presentation the following week.
"I would like for you to be more descriptive in outlining & mapping out your "DESIGN CRITERIA relative to: 

3) Your Design Objectives, Criteria, and Parameters:
5) Comparative/ Competitive Analysis: (describe)
6) Design Drivers/ Design Solution “Inspirations”:

7) Identify the potential, financial or strategic benefits or beneficiaries:

8) Feature/Specifications: Provide Brief descriptive captions to your "Sub-headings", for Example, when you list, "Inspiration," Concept Sketches," Solution," "Design Guide," EXPLAIN/DESCRIBE "What" this means. A TITLE tells me its NAME, but does not provide me with a description, details, or intent!"